Donald Brown said he thinks "the 'death to all adverbs' rule came more from followers of Hemingway", so I checked Ernest Hemingway's use of adverbs in "The Sun Also Rises" (1926). With 966 uses of "said" and 595 "-ly" endings in the novel (out of over 67,000 words), Hemingway only twice attaches an adverb to a quotative: Mike said languidly. He said slowly. With 235 uses of "said" and 856 "-ly" endings in "The Great Gatsby" (1925), out of over 48,000 words, F. Scott Fitzgerald attaches an adverb to a quotative forty-six times (and also does so often with "said" synonyms). As Robert Archambeau likes to say, "more research funding needed!" (Andrew Shields, #111Words, 10 September 2026)

Note: See my previous post and the two links in it for more on adverbs and quotatives in F. Scott Fitzgerald and Shirley Jackson.

Adverbs and quotatives in Ernest Hemingway's "The Sun Also Rises" (1926) and F. Scott Fitzgerald's "The Great Gatsby" (1925)